[TOPIC WRITING]"Should we have to pay to adopt a child?"

What do you think about adopting a child or children? Then, do you think we should have to pay to adopt a child? I think we don't need to pay because we will spend money to grow these children. And there might be some crimes related to this, for example, these crimes might be people kidnapping kids to send them to the orphanage and getting money from the orphanage when they get the money from the poeple who want to adopt them. When poeple should pay to adopt a child, they will need to spend more money to raise their child. And spending money on adopting a child might affect children by their parents using less money if they don't have a lot of money. Also, some poeple will be going to tell people that they need to pay more money to adopt a child, and some people will going to spend more money, which is terrible for those people. So, this means there might be crimes related to this when people need to pay to adopt a child. And it will be going to create other problems related to it, and this might be worse for children who are getting adopted. However, some people claim that paying to adopt a child will stop poeple to adopt a child to abuse them. And this is very true, and there will be most likely no one who is going to adopt a child to abuse them. Then it will be better for children who are going to be adopted. While this is very true, we can't just ignore other problems that are being made because of the fact that we need to pay to adopt a child.  So, I think it is your choice which problem you think should disappear or not exist. The first choice is to make abusing children disappear and the second choice is to make people doing crimes related to this disappear. So, which choice do you think should disappear?

The conclusion is that I think poeple don't need to pay to adopt a child, but making people pay to adopt a child would make people not adopt a child to abuse them. However, making people pay might make people do crimes related to paying to adopt a child. Bye!

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