[TOPIC WRITING]"The world would be more peaceful without religions."

 We are now living in a world where it might not be peaceful, throughout history, there have been conflicts caused by different things such as religion, differences of opinion, conquering lands, etc. There are agreements and disagreements about the world becoming more peaceful without religions. I can't entirely agree that the world will become more peaceful without religions.

Firstly, a lot of people believe in religions, and believing in religions is helping people. When some poeple have problems, they go to religious places to solve their problems, if there was no religion, people would have solved their problems in different ways, and those ways could have been really dangerous for them and other people. For example, when people have problems, they could just break stuff to solve their problems. With a lot of people believing in religions, they get good influences from religious texts. Religious texts tell poeple what is right and wrong and other lessons that you can learn, but if there were no additional good influences from religious texts, more poeple might turn into criminals. For example, people would not be able to determine what is right and wrong easily, and poeple will going to make wrong decisions.

Secondly, there are a lot of religions around the world, and the number of cults is increasing, too. There are more cults nowadays, and this will cause more poeple to fall into cults, and some cults are really violent. For example, some cults make followers hit each other, kick each other, etc. and this will cause harm to a lot of people. People believe in different religions, and there are conflicts caused because of this. Religions tell people different things, and some of them cause conflicts between other religions. For example, during the 11th century, The Crusades happened, this was a war between two different religions.

In my opinion, I disagree that the world will become more peaceful without religion. For example, people can easily identify cults, and religions can talk things out without any war;